Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Fall Semester Final

The Power of Words

  1. She wrote words that were more effective in making passerby sympathize with the man, which motivated more people to donate. 
  2. This video made me feel sad and uplifted at the same time, and it also made me feel inspired and motivated to use "the power of words." 
  3. I think you showed this video to us because it demonstrates how much the right words can affect both people's emotions and actions. It shows that just words can truly make a difference. 
  4. I can "change my words" to have more of an emotional impact on my readers. Two sentences with the same basic meaning can have very different effects on readers because different words, even if they have the same objective meaning, can have very different connotations.
The Guardian: Three Little Pigs
  1. They covered the story through online articles and videos with several different angles. 
  2. No, I don't particularly remember a SWAT team breaking down the pigs' door, or the public outrage and debate over the case, or the pigs confessing to conspiring to commit fraud and frame the Wolf. 
  3. They only seemed to have interviewed police and other officials; they obviously couldn't interview the Wolf and the pigs were in custody. 
  4. The Guardian covered the hard news aspect of the story, people's opinions and outrage over it, the speculation about whether it was an inside job, and scientific simulations providing evidence that the Wolf was framed.
  5. There was never any personal interviews with any of the pigs, and so there wasn't much insight into their lives except for their confession and public speculation, and there wasn't any coverage on the pigs' relationship with the wolf previous to the murder. 
  6. No, they only stated the facts and other people's opinions. 
  7. Yes; obviously not on such a large scale, but there are always stories that will generate controversy and they will always have multiple sides to them. 
  8. We can make sure to interview people who have differing opinions on what we're covering, and we can make sure to do our research on our stories to make sure we're getting the whole picture. 
Self-Reflection
  1. The most important thing I learned this semester in class is that it's okay to sacrifice quality for the sake of deadlines. I mean, I already knew this but I always sort of pushed that knowledge to the side because I hold myself to higher standards than I do to other people and so I guess I kind of saw myself as an "exception."
    I don't want to seem like I mean that in an arrogant way; it's a sort of distorted way of thinking that's produced by anxiety and whatnot. When I hear my teachers or parents say that I just need to churn out a story or assignment and it doesn't have to be perfect, on a superficial level I know that, but that knowledge doesn't immediately change my brain's way of thinking and functioning when I'm trying to get something done. However, I think that towards the end of this semester I finally managed to push through that one or through times which is improvement, even if it was just caused by extreme pressure. 
  2. Most of my reasons for having difficulty being an active member of staff were personal, as you know. When I signed up for newspaper last year I thought that this year I would be better, that I would have started to get my mental health under control and that I would be able to handle being in newspaper and being an editor.
    Instead, things got worse. My mental health hasn't improved and my physical health has declined. The newspaper workload that I thought I'd be able to handle was quickly too overwhelming, and instead of trying to communicate with you more clearly I just sort of shut down and tried to avoid everything, as is common with people who suffer from anxiety disorders, which only resulted in everything piling up and things not getting done. 
  3. Like I said, I think that a great deal of my issues this semester were largely personal. Newspaper is a rigorous class and I knew that when I signed up. We have a product to produce, and I understand the need to push students who aren't pulling their weight.
    However, I do kind of wish that there were options for students like myself who have trouble keeping up with their work for more reasons than just slacking off. I'm disabled because of my chronic illness, and it's caused me to forfeit several things I was previously very involved in. I'd like to be able to participate in newspaper to the degree that I am able without receiving much of a penalty for producing less work than students who aren't dealing with the things I am, but I understand that that probably isn't much of a possibility due to the nature of this class. It's very likely that I will drop this class for the rest of the year, but there's a good possibility I may be back for my junior year in the hopes that I will have stabilized some and learned to cope. 

Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Online Newspaper Bio

I'm Avila Dye and I'm a sophomore. My role on the newspaper staff is co-editor on one of the Student Life pages, and I'm so excited to have this sort of leadership opportunity. I'm also a member of the Starlight Theatre Company as well as the secretary for the Bowie Gay-Straight Alliance. In my free time I enjoy singing, listening to music, writing, and talking to my friends. After school I want to find a career that allows me to pursue both my love for writing and my love for theatre.

Friday, May 29, 2015

Lone Star Dispatch Issue #6 Review

FRONT PAGE:
Summary: 
This article is a summary of the StuCo presidential elections for the 2015-2016 year. It talks about the different candidates and their approach to their campaigns. The two presidents for next year will be Shelby Johnson and Marcus Gallardo. The article also talks about the candidates' passion for student council and leadership.

Graphic Elements: 
There are two photos, one of Shelby Johnson surrounded by her campaigners and another of Brad Mayo on the drum line that was used to pump people up for the elections.

STUDENT LIFE:
Summary: 
This article talks about what various students are planning to do in the upcoming three months of summer. Some students are taking on jobs to make money, others are planning on working out more, going on vacation, or just trying to get some rest.

Graphic Elements: 
This page has a graphic with a stylized map of the world with lines stretching from Austin to places all around the world, illustrating how students will be traveling all around the world this summer. There's a photo of the award that was given to the Bowie choir for their performance at Disney World. There's also a graphic displaying graduation statistics in the US.

NEWS: 
Summary: 
This article talks about the new A-day/B-day schedule for next year, and some of the concerns people have about it. Ruth Ann Widner, an APUSH teacher, and Jade Fabello, one of the candidates for StuCo president talk about concerns about inequity between the time students will get with their teachers on A-days versus B-days.

Graphic Elements: 
On this page there's a photograph of Kara Shannon performing with the color guard during a half-time show.

SPORTS:
Summary: 
The article details the season for the BHS girls' lacrosse team. They made it to state, and while they didn't win the championship they still are fifth best team in Texas. The team sponsor is interviewed, as well as a few team members about their goals for the coming year.

Graphic Elements: 
There is a photograph of Kyle Gray pitching for the baseball team as well as Cat Munoz playing lacrosse. 

ENTERTAINMENT: 
Summary: 
Kamyrn gives a stellar review of Avengers: Age of Ultron, giving it 4 out of 5 stars. She says that it's packed with action as well as giving the characters depth when it goes into detail with their respective backstories or looks into their personal lives. 

Graphic Elements: 
There's a graphic that illustrates the ACL line-up for this year for both weekends, as well as two photos of performers from the Silver Stars' performance in New York City, and a graphic shaped like a movie ticket to illustrate details about the Avengers movie.

COMMENTARY:
Summary: 
Kamryn criticizes the education system, particularly high schools, wondering why teens barely have time to actually be teens if they want to perform well in school at the same time. She talks about how much pressure is put on her and her peers, so much that it's an effort to simply get through the day.

Graphic Elements: 
There's a graphic illustrating the issues with student sharing, and another illustrates the back-breaking pressure students are put under by showing a boy being crushed by various textbooks.

3. Which graphic in this paper was the strongest, in your opinion? WHY?
I think the strongest graphic was the one for ACL. It was very visually appealing, and it also looked like the official ACL graphics with the colors, fonts, and sunflower image. 

4. Which graphic was the weakest, in your opinion? WHY?

I think the weakest graphic was the one for the student sharing article. It was confusing, and I couldn't quite tell exactly what it was trying to show.

5. Look at the political cartoon on page 7 next to the editorial. What is the artists message?

The message is about how much pressure and work is thrust upon high school students by showing a boy being literally crushed under his schoolwork.

Monday, May 25, 2015

Movie Review Exploration


Publication: The Daily News
Writer: Joe Neumaier
Rating: 0/10
High Points: apparently none except for the rare "smirk-inducing" line.
Low Points: everything, apparently. 
Quote: "It wouldn't be hard to be at least a little better than 2009's first "Blart," a very dumb but financially successful comedy for the former "King of Queens" star. But being worse? That's a real accomplishment."

Mad Max: Fury Road
A Visceral, Inventive Blockbuster Roars to Life in 'Mad Max: Fury Road'

Publication: NPR
Writer: Chris Klimek
Rating: 9/10
High Points: stunning visuals, action-packed, unapologetically feminist.
Low Points: none mentioned.
Quote: "A kinetic, hallucinatory, boldly feminist chase flick that, with its vibrant color palette, harrowing stunt work and show-don't-tell style of yarn-spinning, leaves every Marvel movie and every Fast & Furious in its irradiated dust. It's the most visceral blockbuster since Gravity, and it reinvigorates the doomsday genre like no film since The Matrix."

Movie Prep

1. Who are the main characters you would expect to see in the movie, based on the real life events?
Richard Phillips, Abduwali Muse, the other Somali pirates and Captain Phillips's crew.

2. Briefly, in 2-3 paragraphs, tell me what you expect the plot to be in the movie, based on the real life events?

I expect the movie to first give some exposition on Captain Phillips's job and life and sort of show the beginning of the trip being somewhat normal until the pirates board the ship and Phillips is taken captive and everything gets really intense. 
I'm sure there will also be a very intense part where the US military and the pirates have a sort of faceoff, and then at the end it'll maybe show Phillips being reunited with his family and maybe the effects the ordeal has on him (PTSD, etc).

3. Why was this story important?

It was the first time an American ship was hijacked by pirates since the 19th century. 

4. Why did the pirates try to take the ship?

It had millions of dollars worth of cargo on the ship.

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1. List the five most important actors in the film.

Tom Hanks, Barkad Abdi, Barkhad Abdirahman, David Warhofsky, Catherine Keener. 

2. What is the movie rated?
PG-13.

3. Who directed the movie?
Paul Greengrass.

4. Who was the producer?
Dana Brunetti, Michael De Luca, Scott Rudin.

5. What awards did it win?
Top Box Office Film, AFI Movie of the Year, Best Editing, Best Adapted Screenplay.

6. How much did it cost to make?
55 million dollars.

7. How was it received by audiences?
Very well, an average of 8/10 stars. 

8. What did other movie reviews think about the movie?
Most critics were extremely impressed, especially by Hanks and Abdi.

Monday, May 18, 2015

Current Events Quiz 5/18

1. How many people were killed in Waco this weekend in a rival biker gang shootout? How many were injured? How many were detained for questioning? What location did this happen? Page A1 "Biker shootout…"
Nine are killed in the shootout, twenty-five to seventy were taken into questioning. This happened in Waco.

2. What are the five topics the state legislature plans to take on in the final two weeks they are in session? Page A1 "Now or Never"

Tax cuts, budget, abortion, gun bills, and border security.

3. Summarize the stats presented in the info graphic on page B1 "Rainy days by the numbers"
There have been 7.5 inches of rain throughout the week, no counties are in critical drought in Texas, and there are predicted to be only ten 100 degree days this summer. 


4. What are some of the technological inventions that real estate agents are using to help sell homes in markets where homes do not stay on the market very long? Page B5 "New face of real estate"

FaceTime, iPads.

5. Why will funding to help pay for those who died and injured in the Amtrak train wreck be limited to $200 million? Page A6 "Amtrak could pay no more…"

The cap was set to keep Amtrak financially stable should it become independent.

Short Answer: Read the story on page A2 "Will death make Tsarnaev a martyr".

What do you think about this topic? If they put Tsarnaev to death, will he become a martyr and inspire more attacks, or does it matter at this point since he has already carried out his attack?

I personally do not believe in the death penalty at all. I think that life imprisonment without parole is a better punishment for the most heinous of crimes. There are very few people I think should be put to death because not only could they become a martyr in the eyes of their supporters if it were a case such as Tsarnaev, and there is also the issue of people being discovered innocent post-execution.
I'm not really sure whether Tsarnaev has the potential to become a martyr since he was, as the article said, "more of a lone wolf with a low profile among radial jihadists." He doesn't seem like he was particularly outspoken and I haven't seen anything about him saying things that could be used as a rallying cry for people looking to martyrize him. However, it's still possible if the jihadists are desperate for a martyr.

Thursday, May 14, 2015

Captain Phillips Movie Review

Captain Phillips sails at breakneck speeds

The story of Captain Richard Phillips being taken prisoner by Somali pirates made headlines in April of 2009. Its 2013 film adaptation manages to capture the constant tension and high-stakes situations that were undoubtedly present in the real-life events, each turn of the plot upping the ante. Each actor’s performance is superb and intensely emotional, only increasing the harrowing quality of the story.

Richard Phillips (Tom Hanks), the captain of the Maersk Alabama, is on route around the Horn of Africa, when a band of four heavily armed Somali pirates lead by Abduwali Muse (Barkhad Abdi) hijack the cargo ship, and a string of heart-pounding events ensue, making it a white-knuckled ride until the very end.

Tom Hanks and Barkhad Abdi face off as prisoner and captor, both of their characters becoming more and more developed as the plot progresses and they are stretched to their wit’s end. While the film is an ensemble effort, those who really stand out aside from the two primary characters, Phillips and Muse, are the three other pirates (Barkhad Abdirahman, Faysal Ahmed, and Mahat M. Ali) who outshine the members of Phillips’s own crew, the majority of which remain undeveloped in their somewhat minimal screen time after the first third of the movie. While they are objectively the antagonists, their palpable desperation to finish the job gives them a sympathetic angle, which can be summed up by a single exchange between Phillips and Muse; when told by Phillips that there are surely other options than piracy, Muse replies with a simple but profound sentence: “Maybe in America.”

With a terrifyingly true-to-life story and intense, emotional acting, the movie is exceptionably noteworthy. However, the constant moving and shaking of the camera can be somewhat nausea inducing. Though this is presumably to create the atmosphere of being at sea as well as to accentuate the “realness” of the story, it makes it rather inaccessible, or at least difficult to watch, for those with motion sickness.

The film documents a true story of courage, desperation, and raw humanity, Captain Phillips’s fortitude in his situation standing as a testament to the extreme pressure humans can endure.


Fans of thriller movies, especially ones based on true events, will be unable to tear their eyes away from the screen from start to finish. Rated PG-13, younger children, people who are faint of heart, or easily disturbed by scarily real situations may want to stay away. All in all it’s a frightening but riveting film that will leave your heart racing.

Thursday, April 30, 2015

Sports Exploration

1. Choose a sport to research: (Football, Basketball, Baseball, Volleyball, Soccer, Golf, Tennis, etc.)
Tennis

2. Identify your favorite team or athlete for your sport. Search the Internet and find a picture of mascot or photo of the athlete. Save the image to your student folder. 

Serena Williams


Make a new folder called “Sports Exploration” in your student folder to save all of your files for this project. (10 points)

3. Find the most recent rankings for one team or athlete. Include a list of the top 5 teams or athletes for your sport.

Women's Singles:

  1. Serena Williams
  2. Simona Halep
  3. Marina Sharapova
  4. Petra Kvitova
  5. Caroline Wozniacki


Base your rankings from an official ranking for your sport (like Hollinger Power Rankings). Not your opinion. (20 points)
Women's Tennis Rankings
Summary:


1. Wins, losses (5 points)

Won every match this year except one against Simona Halep.

2. Did the team make playoffs? If there are no playoffs, name the major tournaments that your team or athlete competed in? (10 points)

FED Cup Playoffs, Miami, Indian Wells, Australian Open.

3. Who won the top prize or top tournament for your sport last year? (5 points)

Serena Williams.

5. List three important rules for your sport. (10 points)


  • You have to get at least 4 points to win a game. 
  • You have to play at least 6 games to win a set. 
  • First point is worth 15 game points, second point is worth 15 game points, third is worth 10 game points, fourth is game over (unless tied). 

6. List three examples of jargon for your sport and explain what they mean in words non-sport followers could understand. (10 points)


  1. Love - meaning the match is 0 to 0. 
  2. Deuce - the match is 40 to 40.
  3. Game point - when a player needs only one point to win.

7. What is an example of sports cliché associated with your sport or athlete? What is another way you could say it without using a cliché? (10 points)

Cliché: Tennis players grunt when hitting the ball.
Tennis players are vocal while playing because of how hard they're working.

8. Name an athlete who is a legend for setting records for your sport.

Serena Williams.

• birth place

Saginaw, Michigan.

• school attended

Art Institute of Fort Lauderdale.

• teams played for

N/A. Has played with her sister Venus, though.

• records set

6 Grand Slam titles, Simultaneous holder of Olympic gold & and all four majors in doubles. Several more. 

Tuesday, April 28, 2015

Current Events Quiz 4/28

1. What is happening in Baltimore right now? What event sparked the problems? Page A1 "Baltimore explodes…"
There are riots and protests happening in Baltimore, sparked by the death of a man who died due to the treatment he was given in police custody.

2. What are some Bastrop citizens worried about with operation Jade Hills 15? Page A1 "Meeting does little to…."

Bastrop citizens are fearful of a possible military presence in Texas and the confiscation of their guns.

3. How many iPhone 6, 6+ and other models were sold in the first three months of the year? (read carefully.....) Page B5 "Big iPhone sales drive…"

61 million.

4. What is Girlstart? Page D1 "Girlstart keeps growing"

It's a non-profit organization to get girls in 4th to 8th grade involved in STEM programs. 

5. Kim Kardashian...whatever...blah blah blah...Why is this woman still in the news? Okay, seriously, what do you think about Bruce Jenner? Do you really care? Does it really matter? Page D2 "Kardashian…"

I think that the news of Jenner's transition could be an important opportunity for people who aren't particularly aware of the struggles of the transgender community to become educated on such things—that is, as long as the media outlets reporting on the story are responsible and respectful of the issues at hand. 
It's less up to Jenner and the Kardashians for people to be educated properly and more up to the journalists who cover the story. The way they portray Jenner's transition could make or break how thousands of people think about the trans community, which is why it worries me. Mainstream media doesn't have the best track record when it comes to treating trans people with respect in how they refer to them (see: Leelah Alcorn, Chelsea Manning, etc.).


Short Answer: Nepal....what a tragedy. Read the story on page A3 "Nepalese.."

It's always horrifying to hear about this sort of mass carnage. First Haiti, then Japan, and now Nepal. It's hard to comprehend the amount of people who are mourning losses while recovering from injuries of their own, and I hope that there will be a successful international effort to rebuild the buildings that were destroyed. 
I hope that other countries that are in danger of major earthquakes take this as a warning to think ahead and make sure that there is sufficient preparation should such a disaster happen on their own home front. Too many countries, especially developing ones, don't have the funds for precautions that would make buildings resistant to earthquakes, etc. I think that big countries like the US should help these countries out, because we certainly do have the resources. 

Creative Writing Assignment

"The most beautiful smile I ever saw…"

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The most beautiful smile I ever saw was hardly even a smile at all. It was little more than a slight upturning of her lips and small delicate crinkles at the corners of her tear-filled eyes. Despite how her face had swollen from crying, despite the bruise that was blooming around the cut on her cheek, she was radiant. Perhaps it was the solemn conviction in her glassy eyes, or perhaps it was the light from the window behind her that formed a sort of halo around her, but in that moment I knew that this was a girl who was born to be a martyr.

I was so caught up in my thoughts that I forgot she had yet to give me the answer to my question, the answer I knew she would give.

"It's kind of you to offer," she said quietly. "But I can't stay with you. You know that."

I nodded and made a sort of choked hum in the back of my throat to convey my understanding, though I could feel a few of my own tears welling. Why, why, did it have to be her, of all people? Why was it this girl who had allowed herself to have such a duty thrust upon her? She was not, as so many believed, a messiah or a savior. She was a good person, better than most, the best, maybe. But she was hewn of flesh and bone, just as I. 

I frowned at this train of thought. Was that not how all messiahs started out? Flesh and bone?

Perhaps her believers were right in a way. I knew that after she had made a corpse of herself, she would become what they said she was. Flesh and bone can only contain divinity for so long before it’s consumed. Perhaps that explained why the best people burn bright and fast; organic matter can accommodate that sliver of divinity for a length of time that amounts to a cosmic millisecond before it immolates.

Sighing, I smiled wanly at her. “Of course. I understand,” I said, my voice hoarse. “Go, then. Go do what you must do.”


Without another word she nodded and turned away from me, her combat boots leaving sooty footprints in my pristine carpet as she walked to the door. I watched her leave my office, and then turned to my window to watch her exit the building a minute or two later. She strode, without hesitation, down the street and towards the war-zone that was the center of the city. I couldn’t help but feel that I was watching her go to her death sentence. 

Monday, April 20, 2015

Magazine Peer Review

1. What is the name of the magazine and who made it?
Raine Magazine - Violet
2. List two things you liked about the magazine cover
I really loved the photo used for the cover, and the logo/title of the magazine. 
3. Suggest something to the creator to improve the cover
Maybe add a border to the square around the title because the black blends in with the subject's hair. 
4. Why did you pick this cover? Specifically what attracted your eyes.
The title style is really original and the picture is gorgeous.
5. Is there a bar code? 
Yes.
6. Did that make it more "magazine-like"?
Yes.
7. Can you tell if it was a portrait or self-portrait?
Portrait.

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1. What is the name of the magazine and who made it?
The Watch Magazine - Seyi
2. List two things you liked about the magazine cover
The cover photo is really cool; I love the perspective used. I also like how the text avoids covering up the subject.
3. Suggest something to the creator to improve the cover
Find fonts that make the cover look a bit more polished. 
4. Why did you pick this cover? Specifically what attracted your eyes.
The portrait used is interesting.
5. Is there a bar code? 
Yes.
6. Did that make it more "magazine-like"?
Yes.
7. Can you tell if it was a portrait or self-portrait?
Portrait.

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1. What is the name of the magazine and who made it?
Fetch - Laurel
2. List two things you liked about the magazine cover
I liked how the title stood out because how it was arranged vertically, and there were only a few colors in the photo, which made things lest chaotic.
3. Suggest something to the creator to improve the cover
Make sure the words don't overlap with a part of the photo that will make them a bit difficult to read.
4. Why did you pick this cover? Specifically what attracted your eyes.
The colors were very contrasting, which made it look classy and it stood out.
5. Is there a bar code? 
Yes (a QR code).
6. Did that make it more "magazine-like"?
Somewhat. It was a bit odd for it to be a QR code.
7. Can you tell if it was a portrait or self-portrait?
Self portrait.

Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Current Events Quiz 4/14

1. What % of the franchise tax could state business donate to a voucher bill program designed to help students attend private school if they are unhappy with their public school options? Page A1 "Texas Senate…"
Up to 50%. 

2. What are the "two biggest civic challenges" facing Austin, according to mayor Steve Adler? Page A1 "Adler: Austin's success…"

Traffic and housing costs. 

3. What is the political cartoon on Page A9 by Dan Wasserman from the Washington Globe trying to tell is, in your opinion?

The cartoon references the numerous accounts of American police officers shooting unarmed citizens, most, if not all, of whom were black. Many of the murders were caught on tape (and yet very few officers are indicted, not to mention punished). By the graves in "Small Comfort Cemetery" being marked with just the words "There was a video of the shooting," it highlights the fact that despite the fact that there's proof that the victims were innocent, it's a "small comfort" to their loved ones, because they're not coming back.

4. Who won the Master's Golf Tournament over the weekend? Where did he go to college? How old is he? How much money has he made this year? Page C1

Jordan Spieth, the University of Texas, 21, $5 million.


5. What is the number 1 movie in the country this week? Have you seen it? Do you want to go see it? Page D2

Fast and Furious 7, no I haven't seen it, no I don't want to see it. 

Short Answer: Read the story on B1 "Pilot program lets Texas soldiers vote by email"

If this pilot program continues to have the same success it has in the past, it could pave the way for everyone to vote via email. Do you think Americans in 2015 should be voting by email? Do you think there are problems that could arise if people were allowed to vote by email? Are there solutions to those problems? Do you think you might be able to vote via email or online in your lifetime?


No, I don't think that people should be voting by email. Maybe there's potential for electronic voting as a concept, but email can be easily tampered with by people who are experts with things like hacking. I can certainly see candidates having the ballots skewed in their favor, especially as cyber-subterfuge becomes more and more common. There are probably solutions to these problems, but I'd still be wary. I wouldn't doubt it if I'll be able to vote online in my lifetime. 

Monday, April 6, 2015

Favorite Cover



This is my favorite portrait cover out of all of the ones on the website. I love the fuzzy, grainy quality of the photo, and the colors of Nicki's makeup and hair give it a sort of ethereal look that I really like. It’s not a particularly sharp image, in fact it’s a bit blurry and out of focus, but it definitely works here. It’s a very striking and different image that is contrasted by the bold fonts used in the text on the sides and on the cover, which makes it stick out more. It’s a very unusual cover, and it definitely works.