Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Fall Semester Final

The Power of Words

  1. She wrote words that were more effective in making passerby sympathize with the man, which motivated more people to donate. 
  2. This video made me feel sad and uplifted at the same time, and it also made me feel inspired and motivated to use "the power of words." 
  3. I think you showed this video to us because it demonstrates how much the right words can affect both people's emotions and actions. It shows that just words can truly make a difference. 
  4. I can "change my words" to have more of an emotional impact on my readers. Two sentences with the same basic meaning can have very different effects on readers because different words, even if they have the same objective meaning, can have very different connotations.
The Guardian: Three Little Pigs
  1. They covered the story through online articles and videos with several different angles. 
  2. No, I don't particularly remember a SWAT team breaking down the pigs' door, or the public outrage and debate over the case, or the pigs confessing to conspiring to commit fraud and frame the Wolf. 
  3. They only seemed to have interviewed police and other officials; they obviously couldn't interview the Wolf and the pigs were in custody. 
  4. The Guardian covered the hard news aspect of the story, people's opinions and outrage over it, the speculation about whether it was an inside job, and scientific simulations providing evidence that the Wolf was framed.
  5. There was never any personal interviews with any of the pigs, and so there wasn't much insight into their lives except for their confession and public speculation, and there wasn't any coverage on the pigs' relationship with the wolf previous to the murder. 
  6. No, they only stated the facts and other people's opinions. 
  7. Yes; obviously not on such a large scale, but there are always stories that will generate controversy and they will always have multiple sides to them. 
  8. We can make sure to interview people who have differing opinions on what we're covering, and we can make sure to do our research on our stories to make sure we're getting the whole picture. 
Self-Reflection
  1. The most important thing I learned this semester in class is that it's okay to sacrifice quality for the sake of deadlines. I mean, I already knew this but I always sort of pushed that knowledge to the side because I hold myself to higher standards than I do to other people and so I guess I kind of saw myself as an "exception."
    I don't want to seem like I mean that in an arrogant way; it's a sort of distorted way of thinking that's produced by anxiety and whatnot. When I hear my teachers or parents say that I just need to churn out a story or assignment and it doesn't have to be perfect, on a superficial level I know that, but that knowledge doesn't immediately change my brain's way of thinking and functioning when I'm trying to get something done. However, I think that towards the end of this semester I finally managed to push through that one or through times which is improvement, even if it was just caused by extreme pressure. 
  2. Most of my reasons for having difficulty being an active member of staff were personal, as you know. When I signed up for newspaper last year I thought that this year I would be better, that I would have started to get my mental health under control and that I would be able to handle being in newspaper and being an editor.
    Instead, things got worse. My mental health hasn't improved and my physical health has declined. The newspaper workload that I thought I'd be able to handle was quickly too overwhelming, and instead of trying to communicate with you more clearly I just sort of shut down and tried to avoid everything, as is common with people who suffer from anxiety disorders, which only resulted in everything piling up and things not getting done. 
  3. Like I said, I think that a great deal of my issues this semester were largely personal. Newspaper is a rigorous class and I knew that when I signed up. We have a product to produce, and I understand the need to push students who aren't pulling their weight.
    However, I do kind of wish that there were options for students like myself who have trouble keeping up with their work for more reasons than just slacking off. I'm disabled because of my chronic illness, and it's caused me to forfeit several things I was previously very involved in. I'd like to be able to participate in newspaper to the degree that I am able without receiving much of a penalty for producing less work than students who aren't dealing with the things I am, but I understand that that probably isn't much of a possibility due to the nature of this class. It's very likely that I will drop this class for the rest of the year, but there's a good possibility I may be back for my junior year in the hopes that I will have stabilized some and learned to cope. 

Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Online Newspaper Bio

I'm Avila Dye and I'm a sophomore. My role on the newspaper staff is co-editor on one of the Student Life pages, and I'm so excited to have this sort of leadership opportunity. I'm also a member of the Starlight Theatre Company as well as the secretary for the Bowie Gay-Straight Alliance. In my free time I enjoy singing, listening to music, writing, and talking to my friends. After school I want to find a career that allows me to pursue both my love for writing and my love for theatre.

Friday, May 29, 2015

Lone Star Dispatch Issue #6 Review

FRONT PAGE:
Summary: 
This article is a summary of the StuCo presidential elections for the 2015-2016 year. It talks about the different candidates and their approach to their campaigns. The two presidents for next year will be Shelby Johnson and Marcus Gallardo. The article also talks about the candidates' passion for student council and leadership.

Graphic Elements: 
There are two photos, one of Shelby Johnson surrounded by her campaigners and another of Brad Mayo on the drum line that was used to pump people up for the elections.

STUDENT LIFE:
Summary: 
This article talks about what various students are planning to do in the upcoming three months of summer. Some students are taking on jobs to make money, others are planning on working out more, going on vacation, or just trying to get some rest.

Graphic Elements: 
This page has a graphic with a stylized map of the world with lines stretching from Austin to places all around the world, illustrating how students will be traveling all around the world this summer. There's a photo of the award that was given to the Bowie choir for their performance at Disney World. There's also a graphic displaying graduation statistics in the US.

NEWS: 
Summary: 
This article talks about the new A-day/B-day schedule for next year, and some of the concerns people have about it. Ruth Ann Widner, an APUSH teacher, and Jade Fabello, one of the candidates for StuCo president talk about concerns about inequity between the time students will get with their teachers on A-days versus B-days.

Graphic Elements: 
On this page there's a photograph of Kara Shannon performing with the color guard during a half-time show.

SPORTS:
Summary: 
The article details the season for the BHS girls' lacrosse team. They made it to state, and while they didn't win the championship they still are fifth best team in Texas. The team sponsor is interviewed, as well as a few team members about their goals for the coming year.

Graphic Elements: 
There is a photograph of Kyle Gray pitching for the baseball team as well as Cat Munoz playing lacrosse. 

ENTERTAINMENT: 
Summary: 
Kamyrn gives a stellar review of Avengers: Age of Ultron, giving it 4 out of 5 stars. She says that it's packed with action as well as giving the characters depth when it goes into detail with their respective backstories or looks into their personal lives. 

Graphic Elements: 
There's a graphic that illustrates the ACL line-up for this year for both weekends, as well as two photos of performers from the Silver Stars' performance in New York City, and a graphic shaped like a movie ticket to illustrate details about the Avengers movie.

COMMENTARY:
Summary: 
Kamryn criticizes the education system, particularly high schools, wondering why teens barely have time to actually be teens if they want to perform well in school at the same time. She talks about how much pressure is put on her and her peers, so much that it's an effort to simply get through the day.

Graphic Elements: 
There's a graphic illustrating the issues with student sharing, and another illustrates the back-breaking pressure students are put under by showing a boy being crushed by various textbooks.

3. Which graphic in this paper was the strongest, in your opinion? WHY?
I think the strongest graphic was the one for ACL. It was very visually appealing, and it also looked like the official ACL graphics with the colors, fonts, and sunflower image. 

4. Which graphic was the weakest, in your opinion? WHY?

I think the weakest graphic was the one for the student sharing article. It was confusing, and I couldn't quite tell exactly what it was trying to show.

5. Look at the political cartoon on page 7 next to the editorial. What is the artists message?

The message is about how much pressure and work is thrust upon high school students by showing a boy being literally crushed under his schoolwork.

Monday, May 25, 2015

Movie Review Exploration


Publication: The Daily News
Writer: Joe Neumaier
Rating: 0/10
High Points: apparently none except for the rare "smirk-inducing" line.
Low Points: everything, apparently. 
Quote: "It wouldn't be hard to be at least a little better than 2009's first "Blart," a very dumb but financially successful comedy for the former "King of Queens" star. But being worse? That's a real accomplishment."

Mad Max: Fury Road
A Visceral, Inventive Blockbuster Roars to Life in 'Mad Max: Fury Road'

Publication: NPR
Writer: Chris Klimek
Rating: 9/10
High Points: stunning visuals, action-packed, unapologetically feminist.
Low Points: none mentioned.
Quote: "A kinetic, hallucinatory, boldly feminist chase flick that, with its vibrant color palette, harrowing stunt work and show-don't-tell style of yarn-spinning, leaves every Marvel movie and every Fast & Furious in its irradiated dust. It's the most visceral blockbuster since Gravity, and it reinvigorates the doomsday genre like no film since The Matrix."

Movie Prep

1. Who are the main characters you would expect to see in the movie, based on the real life events?
Richard Phillips, Abduwali Muse, the other Somali pirates and Captain Phillips's crew.

2. Briefly, in 2-3 paragraphs, tell me what you expect the plot to be in the movie, based on the real life events?

I expect the movie to first give some exposition on Captain Phillips's job and life and sort of show the beginning of the trip being somewhat normal until the pirates board the ship and Phillips is taken captive and everything gets really intense. 
I'm sure there will also be a very intense part where the US military and the pirates have a sort of faceoff, and then at the end it'll maybe show Phillips being reunited with his family and maybe the effects the ordeal has on him (PTSD, etc).

3. Why was this story important?

It was the first time an American ship was hijacked by pirates since the 19th century. 

4. Why did the pirates try to take the ship?

It had millions of dollars worth of cargo on the ship.

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1. List the five most important actors in the film.

Tom Hanks, Barkad Abdi, Barkhad Abdirahman, David Warhofsky, Catherine Keener. 

2. What is the movie rated?
PG-13.

3. Who directed the movie?
Paul Greengrass.

4. Who was the producer?
Dana Brunetti, Michael De Luca, Scott Rudin.

5. What awards did it win?
Top Box Office Film, AFI Movie of the Year, Best Editing, Best Adapted Screenplay.

6. How much did it cost to make?
55 million dollars.

7. How was it received by audiences?
Very well, an average of 8/10 stars. 

8. What did other movie reviews think about the movie?
Most critics were extremely impressed, especially by Hanks and Abdi.